Wednesday 26 June 2013

演讲題目就是病句 25 Jun 2013

某中文媒體寫的題目:

"陈光诚台湾立法院演讲 亲历议会肢体动作"

 http://www.voachinese.com/content/chen-guangcheng-taipei-20130625/1688631.html

 

错:亲历...  ...动作--  搭配不當  

对: 亲历... ...場面

       

错:  议会肢体动作

对:在議會大廳,肢體碰撞的動作


文章题目应改为:

陈光诚台湾立法院演讲 亲历立法委員推擠的場面

 

Director of the Chinese Teacher Training Centre at the University of Melbourne says wrong ...


以下中文不通顺,你能修改吗?


经过六年的点点滴滴,一个星期一个半小时,他们就没有办法记住语言,更不用说掌握它.多数决定离开小学,他们不会继续去学习”简·奥顿,墨尔本大学中文教师培训中心主任说

奥顿博士说,互联网是一个推动者,不能代替对教学质素



''After six years of bits and pieces, half an hour a week, they have no way of remembering the language, let alone mastering it so the majority decide when leaving primary school that they're not going to go on learning,'' the director of the Chinese Teacher Training Centre at the University of Melbourne, Jane Orton, said.
Dr Orton said the internet was an enabler but no substitute for quality teaching.???